Dramatic Foil Template 1
Foil claim: [Character A] functions as a foil to [Character B] because both [shared basis] but differ in [meaningful response/value].
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Effective foil analysis identifies a meaningful contrast supported by parallel situations or relationships and explains what the contrast reveals rather than merely listing personality differences between two characters.
Foil claim: [Character A] functions as a foil to [Character B] because both [shared basis] but differ in [meaningful response/value].
Parallel scene: When both characters face [situation], A [choice] while B [choice], revealing [trait/theme].
Development: Early in the work, the foil emphasizes [difference]; later, [change] complicates that contrast by [effect].
Theme link: Their contrasting responses to [issue] turn the foil relationship into a debate about [theme].
Claim/source status audit: Item [claim/source/example] | Status [active / review due / stale / corrected / retracted / superseded] | Controlling source/version [x] | Last verified [date/version] | Stale trigger [x] | Correction severity [0–3] | Reader disclosure [none / note / correction / withdrawal] | Changelog entry [what changed + why].
Dependency and propagation audit: Claim / example / recommendation [x] | Controlling source / project record [x] | Dependency strength [direct / shared / advisory / independent] | Review trigger / reason code [x] | Needs-review scope [local / direct dependents / cluster] | Replacement source requirements [x] | Carry-forward decision [x] | Propagation targets [x] | Reader disclosure / changelog action [x].
Persistent editorial registry audit: Topic slug → [ ]; claim UID/key → [ ]; source UID/key → [ ]; dependency UID + strength → [ ]; source status/version → [ ]; open review UID/reason/priority → [ ]; replacement source if any → [ ]; reviewer + resolution → [ ].