Illustrative data: monthly support tickets — Jan 120, Feb 128, Mar 131, Apr 166, May 138, Jun 136.
Why it works: The paragraph gives the overview first, selects start/peak/end values, and does not invent a cause for April.
Start with the worked examples to see complete reasoning, then use the shorter pattern library for variation. Level guidance and frameworks show how the same task changes as the evidence, audience, or assignment becomes more demanding.
A strong graph description gives readers the overall pattern first, then uses a few well-chosen values, comparisons, peaks, changes, or anomalies to support that summary without narrating every point on the chart or inventing causes the graph cannot establish.
Use these fuller examples to see what changes between a recognizable pattern and a finished piece of writing. The examples are original or explicitly illustrative, so they demonstrate structure without inventing real-world evidence.
Illustrative data: monthly support tickets — Jan 120, Feb 128, Mar 131, Apr 166, May 138, Jun 136.
Why it works: The paragraph gives the overview first, selects start/peak/end values, and does not invent a cause for April.
Illustrative data: completion rate — Team A 78%, Team B 91%, Team C 84%, Team D 69%.
Why it works: The description prioritizes ranking and the largest meaningful gap rather than listing numbers without comparison.
Illustrative data: budget — housing 38%, food 19%, transport 14%, savings 17%, other 12%.
Why it works: The paragraph describes composition and comparison; it does not claim whether the allocation is good or bad.
Illustrative pattern: practice minutes and quiz score show an upward cloud with several outliers.
Why it works: The analysis distinguishes visual association, strength, outliers, and causation.
Illustrative distribution: most reading sessions fall between 20 and 50 minutes, with a long right tail.
Why it works: The paragraph describes distribution shape instead of treating histogram bars as unrelated categories.
| Level | What changes | Quality test |
|---|---|---|
| Basic data description | Name the graph, variables, units, and obvious high/low or rise/fall pattern. | Accuracy is more important than sophisticated interpretation. |
| Academic / report writing | Lead with an overview, select supporting values, compare groups or periods, and note anomalies. | Avoid narrating every point. |
| Analytical commentary | Separate observation from explanation, consider scale and missing data, and qualify causal claims. | Explain what the display can and cannot establish. |
Observation → function 1. What can the viewpoint actually perceive? 2. Which 1–2 details matter now? 3. What do those details change in image, pace, relationship, or action? 4. What interpretation remains uncertain?
Generic → specific revision Generic line: [x] Observable evidence: [x] Context/constraint: [x] Unnecessary inference removed: [x] Revised line: [x]
Line graph: “Enrollment rose from 420 students in 2021 to 560 in 2024, with the largest year-to-year increase occurring between 2022 and 2023.”
Bar graph: “The East region recorded the highest satisfaction score at 84%, nine percentage points above the West region.”
Pie chart: “Housing accounts for 38% of the illustrative monthly budget, making it the largest single category.”
Scatter plot: “The points show a moderate upward association: higher practice time generally coincides with higher scores, although several observations fall away from the overall pattern.”
Histogram: “Most observations fall between 40 and 60 minutes, while relatively few occur above 80 minutes.”
Two-line comparison: “Both series rise over the period, but Series A grows faster after Q2 and ends 14 units above Series B.”
Plateau: “After increasing through May, the measure remains close to 72–74 for the final three months.”
Volatility: “The monthly total fluctuates between 110 and 165 rather than following a steady upward or downward trend.”
Anomaly: “April breaks the otherwise gradual pattern, falling to 48 before the series returns to the previous range in May.”
Percentage-point wording: “The response rate increased from 62% to 71%, a rise of nine percentage points.”
Cautious interpretation: “The graph shows that the two measures move together in this sample; it does not by itself establish that one causes the other.”
Data-quality note: “Because no value is reported for June, the apparent change from May to July should not be described as a continuous two-month trend.”
Keep the underlying decision or pattern, then replace the subject, evidence, relationship, constraints, and tone with details that belong to your situation. If your final line still works after swapping only one noun, it may be too close to the example.